Format: Kindle, 436 pages
Release Date: June 2, 2021
Publisher: Maria V. Snyder
Source: Kindle
Genre: Young Adult / Fantasy
Through her courage and
tenacity, Shyla Sun-Kissed has awoken the power of The Eyes of Tamburah.
But this feat only marks the beginning of the challenges that the
magical order, the Invisible Sword, faces to free the underground city
of Zirdai.
Though they have allies among the monks and splinter
cells inside the city, Shyla knows the Invisible Sword doesn't have the
strength to win. With the group fracturing due to the strain of losses
from their latest ordeal, thinly veiled suspicions and endless
disagreements, it's up to Shyla to forge a new united order.
When
both the draconian Water Prince and brutal Heliacal Priestess learn of
Shyla's new powers, life becomes even more complicated as they will stop
at nothing to capture Shyla and take the magic of The Eyes for
themselves. Hunted at every turn and unable to hide, Shyla and the
Invisible Sword must use every resource at their command - and unearth
new ones - in their race to save the city from destruction. But their
enemies always seem to be one step ahead. And the cost to win the battle
may be more than Shyla would ever be willing to pay.
The City of Zirdai is the second installment in author Maria V. Synder's Archives of the Invisible Sword. Shyla Sun-Kissed has done the impossible. She's awakened the Eyes of Tamburah and is now the leader of the Invisible Sword which is a magical group determined to save Zirdai from corruption by the Water Prince and Heliacal Priestess. However, the cost has been great. She's lost dozens of her own, and had a dozen more captured. Shyla is left with only about 30 people. The problem is that fewer and fewer magical users are being born, and those who are Sun-Kissed, are still taken out in the desert to die.
The first part of this story is mainly Shyla trying to build a secretive base where they can train and collecting more followers and resources which they need to feed those willing to work with The Invisible Sword. Thanks to her new magical abilities, Shyla can look into a persons soul and see if they are magically inclined or not. Unfortunately, she's also having issues with Rendor who seems the odd man out and not liked by that many people. That puts a strain on their relationship which doesn't really balance until later in the story. Shyla also gets a kick to the stomach when she finally learns about who her mother is.
The second part is a bit more action packed with Shyla getting into and out of trouble almost every time she returns to Zirdai. She knows that both the Prince and Princess will do anything to capture Shyla and take her eyes and thus the magic behind them. Shyla
has also been busy doing a lot of recruiting not only from possible magic users, but from the monks of Parzival, vagrants, guards, arch deacons, and anyone who will be willing to stand up for justice over tyranny. When her parents are taken and held against their will, Shyla has to come up with a plan to ensure that when all is said and done her group will have won the day and overthrown two tyrants.
If you are like many on Goodreads, you have probably already read the synopsis to the third installment. So, let's just say that after all is said and done and new players have taken the places of former tyrants, Shyla now has to deal with an even bigger challenge. She has to travel to meet the King of Koraha. This should be interesting.
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Chapter One
Sand.
It was everywhere, in everything, and unending. Shyla moved yet another heavy shovelful of the reddish-orange stuff and glared at the pile as if her censure would keep the annoying grains from returning. Of course, they would blow right on back, invariably blocking one of the many critical air vents of their new headquarters. No wonder the underground cities of Koraha had entire crews of people whose sole job was sand removal. Yet another aspect of life that Shyla had taken for granted when she lived in the city of Zirdai.
She paused to wipe the sweat from her brow. The sun was a few angles above the horizon. Its jump had just started, casting long shadows across the desert. The light breeze cooled her body. This was her favorite time of a sun jump.
Taking in the scenery, Shyla noted the distant clumps of vegetation, the rolling red dunes, the pink sky, and Rendor's muscular arms flexing as he worked. Streaks of sweat ran down the sides of his dark face and stained his sleeveless tunic. He'd taken off his sun cloak, its protective fibers not needed at this time. During the early angles, the sun warmed the land, but as it continued its jump over the sky, the heat would increase until anyone trapped on the surface would be cooked alive.
Rendor caught her looking at him. He smiled. A strange flutter brushed her heart. She ducked her head before she could grin back at him like some lovestruck ninny. After all, she was the leader of the Invisible Sword, a magical organization determined to save Zirdai from the corrupt and power-hungry Water Prince and Heliacal Priestess. Both of whom had no qualms torturing and killing innocent people.
"That sand's not going to move itself, Your Highness," Gurice called. She paused with a full bucket of it in her hands. Her job was to spread out the sand that arrived via a pulley from the deeper levels.
"It will once you teach me how," Shyla countered, ignoring the good-natured jab. She'd been called worse. With her blond hair, eyebrows, and eyelashes, she was sun-kissed and therefore an oddity among the people of Koraha.
"That would be a waste of your energy."
And exhausting herself each sun jump clearing sand was not a waste? Shyla swallowed that comment.
Everyone had been working hard to make the Temple of Arinna--their new headquarters--livable. Like all the ancient surface buildings on Koraha, the sand had eventually buried it.
And while they were happy for it to remain underground--the location was a secret after all--they still needed an entrance, escape tunnels in case of a cave-in, and vents for air shafts. Plus many of the twelve levels were filled with sand, which needed to be dug out and evenly distributed on the surface. The good news had been the inner core of the temple remained sand-free and they were able to occupy it and stay safe during the killing heat and freezing darkness.
Shyla still couldn't help being frustrated. She had so much to learn about magic, The Eyes, and the Invisible Sword. But their survival came first. They had to leave the monastery before the prince and priestess forced the monks to hand over the surviving Invisible Swords.
Instead of acquiring knowledge on her powerful new eyes, she was learning how much food and water thirty people needed each sun jump, how many collection stations were required, and how often they should be cleaned out. Not that she was complaining; it was better than being hung upside down in one of the prince's special rooms or being forced to confess her sins by the priestess's deacons. She shuddered.
The Monks of Parzival had given them some supplies along with a few more recruits...well, the acolytes had decided to join them instead of the monks. But the pro-visions were dwindling. A point made clear when Shyla and her team of nine retreated underground ten angles before the sun reached the danger zone at angle eighty. The temperature cooled significantly as they descended to level eight, which was deep enough to be safe from the heat. The yellow light from the druk lanterns was weak in comparison to the sun and they slowed, allowing their eyes to adjust to the dimness.
Jayden and Ximen waited for her in the common room. It was a large open area with a handful of benches, low stone tables, and cushions scattered around. A few of their members had gathered in small clumps, eating rolls of velbloud jerky. Unfortunately, jerky was the only food they were able to acquire at this time. Some groups conversed in low tones, while others played dice or other games. The entire organization had divided into three teams of ten to distribute the workload. One team slept while another rested and the third worked. Then they'd rotate.
The two men pulled Shyla aside as the others in her team filled their empty water skins and joined those not on duty for second meal. Rendor frowned, but didn't follow them. Probably due to Jayden's glare.
"We're running out of water," Jayden said to her. He was one of her seconds-in-command for three reasons: his magic was the second most powerful, he knew the city of Zirdai better than anyone, and he had a network of vagrants who provided information and resources.
"How long do we have?" she asked.
"Three, maybe five sun jumps at most."
Alarmed, she asked, "Why didn't you tell me sooner?"
Jayden tilted his head at the glass jugs lined along the wall. "Two of the new jugs are poisoned."
Back before getting involved with the Invisible Sword, she would have been shocked, but, after witnessing the Water Prince's cruelty, she wasn't surprised. If a citizen didn't pay taxes to the prince, then they didn't get clean water. Vagrants who couldn't afford the price or those who chose not to support the prince found other sources of water and took the chance it might be poisoned by the prince's guards. The vagrants had learned to give a sample of the water to sand rats before drinking it.
"Can we get more?" she asked.
"The vagrants are stretched thin," Jayden said. He exchanged a glance with Ximen, her other second-in-command, who'd remained quiet until now.
"We know where there's plenty," Ximen said.
And she wasn't going to like it. Otherwise, Jayden would have told her. He probably didn't want to spark yet another argument between them. Despite waking the power of The Eyes, Shyla hadn't earned Jayden's trust. He also hated Rendor and was used to making all the decisions. The Vagrant Prince she called him. His loyalty was split between the vagrants and the Invisible Sword. But she needed him.
"Don't keep me in suspense, Ximen."
"At our old headquarters. We have heaps of supplies that we left behind, including water."
"Left behind for a very good reason." The Arch Deacons had ambushed them, killing a number of Invisible Swords and capturing over a dozen. Only eleven escaped. And her friend Banqui was still missing. "It's probably all been confiscated by now."
"The supplies were well hidden," Ximen said.
"Doesn't matter. I'm sure someone is watching for us to return."
"We're the Invisible Sword, Shyla. We can bypass a few watchers long enough to confirm the supplies are there." Jayden ran a hand through his golden-brown hair--a sign he was losing his patience. "You need to remember that."
"I'm well aware," she snapped. "And you need to remember that the Heliacal Priestess has a dozen platinum torques that block our magic, Jayden."
They glared at each other. At one hundred and eighty-two centimeters, he was about twelve centimeters taller than Shyla. He had a thin wiry build and light sienna-colored skin.
"We can send a couple scouts to locate any watchers and check if they're protected by those torques first," Ximen said. "It's worth the risk. We're running out of food, too."
"I need to talk to Rendor first," she said.
"What for?" Jayden demanded. "He's not in charge. We are."
"No. I am. And I don't have to explain my reasons to you." She strode away.
Jayden was infuriating. He claimed he wasn't in the upper echelons of the Invisible Sword's leadership, but he certainly acted like he'd been in charge and was used to getting his own way. Good-looking and charming when he wished to be, Jayden just had to flutter those long eyelashes that framed his amber eyes and supposedly women melted.
Shyla filled her water skin halfway and grabbed a roll of jerky. She scanned the room. Rendor sat alone in a far corner. No surprise there. The others still avoided him and it would take a long time for them to forgive him. He'd earned his ruthless reputation when he was the captain of the Water Prince's guards. During those circuits, the vagrants and Invisible Swords all feared him with good reason. But he was no longer that man. Shyla had read his soul with The Eyes and had assured them he was trustworthy. Her word was the only reason they tolerated Rendor's presence among them.
She joined him, plopping on the cushion next to him. Gnawing on the end of the jerky, Shyla missed the hot savory gamelu stew and fresh vegetables served in the dining caverns. The Heliacal Priestess's deacons tended about half the flocks of velbloud and herds of gamelu on the surface and they worked in the growing caverns on level six. She could sneak in during one of the meals, but, for those who didn't pay their tithe, it would be stealing. And she decided the Invisible Swords would not steal from the priestess or the prince. Right now, they used Rendor's savings to purchase supplies. He'd been well paid as a captain and had donated them. However, he wouldn't let her tell anyone. Everyone believed the monks had given the osmiums to them. Just what she didn't need--another infuriating man.
"What's wrong?" Rendor asked.
She glanced at him.
"And don't say nothing because you're attacking that jerky like a sand demon ripping apart a fresh kill."
Shyla stopped eating. The roll did appear to be rather mangled.
"Another argument with Jayden?" he asked.
"Not really." She turned her attention to Rendor. Concern filled his dark brown eyes, the golden flecks barely visible in the dull light. "Do you remember when you said you were close to discovering the Invisible Sword's hideout?"
He stilled. Rendor didn't like talking about his time as the captain. "Yes."
"How close?"
"We determined there had to be entrances to it on levels twenty-three to twenty-five. Suspected members were spotted most frequently on those levels. But we didn't know the exact location of their headquarters."
Yet the priestess had. Someone had betrayed the Invisible Swords. Jayden suspected Banqui, her friend who disappeared after the ambush. He'd said everyone else was trustworthy. "Would the priestess tell the prince where it was?"
"No."
"Why not?"
"They hate each other and she wouldn't want the prince to have a chance to recover The Eyes, even if it's a small one."
At least they only had to worry about the Arch Deacons ambushing them.
Rendor scowled. "You're not thinking of going back there, are you? Her deacons will no doubt be watching the place."
Normally she admired Rendor's sharp intellect. This time, she braced for his arguments as she told him what she'd discussed with Jayden.
"It's not worth the risk," he said.
"We're running out of food and water."
"Still not worth it. But if you're determined, pay a couple vagrants to check it out."
She wasn't sure she could trust them. Plus the deacons would be suspicious. No, they'd have to send someone who knew the location, someone who was good at staying hidden, and someone who had powerful magic. Jayden, Mojag, and her.
Rendor clasped her hand. "It's suicide, Shyla. The Heliacal Priestess and Water Prince don't care about any of the Invisible Swords. Except you. You're the prize they both want."
"I can't hide here when my people are in danger. That's not how this is going to work."
"I know. But you can't blame me for trying."
She squeezed his fingers. Her golden-brown skin was a few shades lighter than his. He blended in well with the shadows. But with his powerful frame and oversized shoulders, he stood out among the citizens of Zirdai. About eight centimeters taller than Jayden, he loomed over all the Invisible Swords, unintentionally intimidating them. At one point in time, he intimidated her. But she'd grown immune to his scowls, glares, and imposing body language. Well, mostly.
Rendor tilted his head in Jayden's direction. "I'm guessing you'll take him."
"Yes, but we're just going to do a little reconnaissance."
"I can help."
"I know."
"Are you sure you do? I can do more than shovel sand," he grumped.
"I'm sure. But let's face it, you look mighty fine when you shovel sand."
He leaned closer. "Sunbeam, I'd be happy to give you a private show anytime." His voice rasped low and husky.
She swallowed. Was the room always this warm?
He laughed at her expression. Annoyed, she swatted his arm with her free hand. It was like slapping marble. Rendor laughed harder.
Sand.
It was everywhere, in everything, and unending. Shyla moved yet another heavy shovelful of the reddish-orange stuff and glared at the pile as if her censure would keep the annoying grains from returning. Of course, they would blow right on back, invariably blocking one of the many critical air vents of their new headquarters. No wonder the underground cities of Koraha had entire crews of people whose sole job was sand removal. Yet another aspect of life that Shyla had taken for granted when she lived in the city of Zirdai.
She paused to wipe the sweat from her brow. The sun was a few angles above the horizon. Its jump had just started, casting long shadows across the desert. The light breeze cooled her body. This was her favorite time of a sun jump.
Taking in the scenery, Shyla noted the distant clumps of vegetation, the rolling red dunes, the pink sky, and Rendor's muscular arms flexing as he worked. Streaks of sweat ran down the sides of his dark face and stained his sleeveless tunic. He'd taken off his sun cloak, its protective fibers not needed at this time. During the early angles, the sun warmed the land, but as it continued its jump over the sky, the heat would increase until anyone trapped on the surface would be cooked alive.
Rendor caught her looking at him. He smiled. A strange flutter brushed her heart. She ducked her head before she could grin back at him like some lovestruck ninny. After all, she was the leader of the Invisible Sword, a magical organization determined to save Zirdai from the corrupt and power-hungry Water Prince and Heliacal Priestess. Both of whom had no qualms torturing and killing innocent people.
"That sand's not going to move itself, Your Highness," Gurice called. She paused with a full bucket of it in her hands. Her job was to spread out the sand that arrived via a pulley from the deeper levels.
"It will once you teach me how," Shyla countered, ignoring the good-natured jab. She'd been called worse. With her blond hair, eyebrows, and eyelashes, she was sun-kissed and therefore an oddity among the people of Koraha.
"That would be a waste of your energy."
And exhausting herself each sun jump clearing sand was not a waste? Shyla swallowed that comment.
Everyone had been working hard to make the Temple of Arinna--their new headquarters--livable. Like all the ancient surface buildings on Koraha, the sand had eventually buried it.
And while they were happy for it to remain underground--the location was a secret after all--they still needed an entrance, escape tunnels in case of a cave-in, and vents for air shafts. Plus many of the twelve levels were filled with sand, which needed to be dug out and evenly distributed on the surface. The good news had been the inner core of the temple remained sand-free and they were able to occupy it and stay safe during the killing heat and freezing darkness.
Shyla still couldn't help being frustrated. She had so much to learn about magic, The Eyes, and the Invisible Sword. But their survival came first. They had to leave the monastery before the prince and priestess forced the monks to hand over the surviving Invisible Swords.
Instead of acquiring knowledge on her powerful new eyes, she was learning how much food and water thirty people needed each sun jump, how many collection stations were required, and how often they should be cleaned out. Not that she was complaining; it was better than being hung upside down in one of the prince's special rooms or being forced to confess her sins by the priestess's deacons. She shuddered.
The Monks of Parzival had given them some supplies along with a few more recruits...well, the acolytes had decided to join them instead of the monks. But the pro-visions were dwindling. A point made clear when Shyla and her team of nine retreated underground ten angles before the sun reached the danger zone at angle eighty. The temperature cooled significantly as they descended to level eight, which was deep enough to be safe from the heat. The yellow light from the druk lanterns was weak in comparison to the sun and they slowed, allowing their eyes to adjust to the dimness.
Jayden and Ximen waited for her in the common room. It was a large open area with a handful of benches, low stone tables, and cushions scattered around. A few of their members had gathered in small clumps, eating rolls of velbloud jerky. Unfortunately, jerky was the only food they were able to acquire at this time. Some groups conversed in low tones, while others played dice or other games. The entire organization had divided into three teams of ten to distribute the workload. One team slept while another rested and the third worked. Then they'd rotate.
The two men pulled Shyla aside as the others in her team filled their empty water skins and joined those not on duty for second meal. Rendor frowned, but didn't follow them. Probably due to Jayden's glare.
"We're running out of water," Jayden said to her. He was one of her seconds-in-command for three reasons: his magic was the second most powerful, he knew the city of Zirdai better than anyone, and he had a network of vagrants who provided information and resources.
"How long do we have?" she asked.
"Three, maybe five sun jumps at most."
Alarmed, she asked, "Why didn't you tell me sooner?"
Jayden tilted his head at the glass jugs lined along the wall. "Two of the new jugs are poisoned."
Back before getting involved with the Invisible Sword, she would have been shocked, but, after witnessing the Water Prince's cruelty, she wasn't surprised. If a citizen didn't pay taxes to the prince, then they didn't get clean water. Vagrants who couldn't afford the price or those who chose not to support the prince found other sources of water and took the chance it might be poisoned by the prince's guards. The vagrants had learned to give a sample of the water to sand rats before drinking it.
"Can we get more?" she asked.
"The vagrants are stretched thin," Jayden said. He exchanged a glance with Ximen, her other second-in-command, who'd remained quiet until now.
"We know where there's plenty," Ximen said.
And she wasn't going to like it. Otherwise, Jayden would have told her. He probably didn't want to spark yet another argument between them. Despite waking the power of The Eyes, Shyla hadn't earned Jayden's trust. He also hated Rendor and was used to making all the decisions. The Vagrant Prince she called him. His loyalty was split between the vagrants and the Invisible Sword. But she needed him.
"Don't keep me in suspense, Ximen."
"At our old headquarters. We have heaps of supplies that we left behind, including water."
"Left behind for a very good reason." The Arch Deacons had ambushed them, killing a number of Invisible Swords and capturing over a dozen. Only eleven escaped. And her friend Banqui was still missing. "It's probably all been confiscated by now."
"The supplies were well hidden," Ximen said.
"Doesn't matter. I'm sure someone is watching for us to return."
"We're the Invisible Sword, Shyla. We can bypass a few watchers long enough to confirm the supplies are there." Jayden ran a hand through his golden-brown hair--a sign he was losing his patience. "You need to remember that."
"I'm well aware," she snapped. "And you need to remember that the Heliacal Priestess has a dozen platinum torques that block our magic, Jayden."
They glared at each other. At one hundred and eighty-two centimeters, he was about twelve centimeters taller than Shyla. He had a thin wiry build and light sienna-colored skin.
"We can send a couple scouts to locate any watchers and check if they're protected by those torques first," Ximen said. "It's worth the risk. We're running out of food, too."
"I need to talk to Rendor first," she said.
"What for?" Jayden demanded. "He's not in charge. We are."
"No. I am. And I don't have to explain my reasons to you." She strode away.
Jayden was infuriating. He claimed he wasn't in the upper echelons of the Invisible Sword's leadership, but he certainly acted like he'd been in charge and was used to getting his own way. Good-looking and charming when he wished to be, Jayden just had to flutter those long eyelashes that framed his amber eyes and supposedly women melted.
Shyla filled her water skin halfway and grabbed a roll of jerky. She scanned the room. Rendor sat alone in a far corner. No surprise there. The others still avoided him and it would take a long time for them to forgive him. He'd earned his ruthless reputation when he was the captain of the Water Prince's guards. During those circuits, the vagrants and Invisible Swords all feared him with good reason. But he was no longer that man. Shyla had read his soul with The Eyes and had assured them he was trustworthy. Her word was the only reason they tolerated Rendor's presence among them.
She joined him, plopping on the cushion next to him. Gnawing on the end of the jerky, Shyla missed the hot savory gamelu stew and fresh vegetables served in the dining caverns. The Heliacal Priestess's deacons tended about half the flocks of velbloud and herds of gamelu on the surface and they worked in the growing caverns on level six. She could sneak in during one of the meals, but, for those who didn't pay their tithe, it would be stealing. And she decided the Invisible Swords would not steal from the priestess or the prince. Right now, they used Rendor's savings to purchase supplies. He'd been well paid as a captain and had donated them. However, he wouldn't let her tell anyone. Everyone believed the monks had given the osmiums to them. Just what she didn't need--another infuriating man.
"What's wrong?" Rendor asked.
She glanced at him.
"And don't say nothing because you're attacking that jerky like a sand demon ripping apart a fresh kill."
Shyla stopped eating. The roll did appear to be rather mangled.
"Another argument with Jayden?" he asked.
"Not really." She turned her attention to Rendor. Concern filled his dark brown eyes, the golden flecks barely visible in the dull light. "Do you remember when you said you were close to discovering the Invisible Sword's hideout?"
He stilled. Rendor didn't like talking about his time as the captain. "Yes."
"How close?"
"We determined there had to be entrances to it on levels twenty-three to twenty-five. Suspected members were spotted most frequently on those levels. But we didn't know the exact location of their headquarters."
Yet the priestess had. Someone had betrayed the Invisible Swords. Jayden suspected Banqui, her friend who disappeared after the ambush. He'd said everyone else was trustworthy. "Would the priestess tell the prince where it was?"
"No."
"Why not?"
"They hate each other and she wouldn't want the prince to have a chance to recover The Eyes, even if it's a small one."
At least they only had to worry about the Arch Deacons ambushing them.
Rendor scowled. "You're not thinking of going back there, are you? Her deacons will no doubt be watching the place."
Normally she admired Rendor's sharp intellect. This time, she braced for his arguments as she told him what she'd discussed with Jayden.
"It's not worth the risk," he said.
"We're running out of food and water."
"Still not worth it. But if you're determined, pay a couple vagrants to check it out."
She wasn't sure she could trust them. Plus the deacons would be suspicious. No, they'd have to send someone who knew the location, someone who was good at staying hidden, and someone who had powerful magic. Jayden, Mojag, and her.
Rendor clasped her hand. "It's suicide, Shyla. The Heliacal Priestess and Water Prince don't care about any of the Invisible Swords. Except you. You're the prize they both want."
"I can't hide here when my people are in danger. That's not how this is going to work."
"I know. But you can't blame me for trying."
She squeezed his fingers. Her golden-brown skin was a few shades lighter than his. He blended in well with the shadows. But with his powerful frame and oversized shoulders, he stood out among the citizens of Zirdai. About eight centimeters taller than Jayden, he loomed over all the Invisible Swords, unintentionally intimidating them. At one point in time, he intimidated her. But she'd grown immune to his scowls, glares, and imposing body language. Well, mostly.
Rendor tilted his head in Jayden's direction. "I'm guessing you'll take him."
"Yes, but we're just going to do a little reconnaissance."
"I can help."
"I know."
"Are you sure you do? I can do more than shovel sand," he grumped.
"I'm sure. But let's face it, you look mighty fine when you shovel sand."
He leaned closer. "Sunbeam, I'd be happy to give you a private show anytime." His voice rasped low and husky.
She swallowed. Was the room always this warm?
He laughed at her expression. Annoyed, she swatted his arm with her free hand. It was like slapping marble. Rendor laughed harder.
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