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Wednesday, October 7, 2020

#Review - The Nemesis by S.J. Kincaid #YA #Science #Fiction

Series: The Diabolic # 3
Format: Hardcover, 416 pages
Release Date: August 25, 2020
Publisher: Simon Schuster Books
Source: Publisher
Genre: YA / Science Fiction / Dystopian

In the heart-pounding conclusion to the New York Times bestselling Diabolic series, the Empire teeters on the edge of destruction as rumors spread that Nemesis is still alive.

Three years ago, Tyrus Domitrian shocked the galaxy by killing the woman he swore to love forever. The woman for whom he upended the Empire. The woman with whom he wanted to build a new and brighter future.

Now, the once-idealistic heir apparent has become the cruel Emperor Tyrus, wielding his authority with an iron fist, capable of destroying planets with a single word, controlling all technology with a simple thought. He has bent the Grandiloquy to their knees, and none has the power to stand against him.

But there is a muttering among the Excess. They say that Nemesis is not truly gone. They whisper of her shadow spotted in distant star systems. They say that Nemesis lives. That she will rise, and rally the people to topple the man who was once her truest love—and is now her fiercest enemy.  
 



The Nemesis, by author S.J. Kincaid, is the long-awaited series finale to the authors Diabolic trilogy. A story that took 3 years to complete. The story starts off by flashing backward and forward to cover the months since we last saw Nemesis, the most famous face and hair in the galaxy. Nemesis, who was engineered for murder but found love, is living a life of obscurity on Devil's Shade mining colony. It has been 3 years since her husband, Emperor Tyrus, drove a sword into her chest. If Tyrus can murder his own wife, nobody is safe.

 

5 months after she was killed, Neveni Sagnau, who joined with the Partisans, an organized resistance group of Excess against Tyrus and the Empire, tried to kill Nemesis after she saved Tyrus from an assassination attempt. It is better for everyone that the galaxy believe that she really is dead. Her only companion is her Diabolic brother Anguish who is suffering from an untreatable disease that has ravaged his body and there’s no real cure. Trouble soon arrives after people on Devil’s Shade recognize Nemesis and word gets back to Tyrus who sends Inquisitors to bring her back to.

 

Meanwhile, Tyrus has seriously gone crazy to the point of naming himself a God and using malignant space to destroy a supernova. He's also forced the elite of the Empire, the Grandiloquy, to believe everything he says and does even as stupid or bonkers as it may be, or he threatens them with destruction by malignant space. The problem is that there are those who believe that Nemesis is alive and not dead as the lunatic Emperor has proclaimed. So, when Nemesis does arrive, she has to come up with ways of escaping from any plans Tyrus has for her.

 

Nemesis has been struggling with her identity from the first time she had to become Donia, and I think she finally found the balance needed to live her best life. Nemesis's emotional journey is one of heart break, and scenes of lots of murder, mayhem, and bloodshed as she tried to send a message to Tyrus that she's not easily killable. Nemesis is, as always, a force to be reckoned with on her own, and once more does not hesitate to get her hands dirty to accomplish her own goals. I really liked her relationship with Anguish. The two have proven they are capable of human feelings including love.

 

One of my biggest pet peeves is that it took so long for this book to be released (3 years), that you really ought to go back and read the books as they were released or together if you can. I would have loved to have some sort of recap with a list of important characters like Neveni and Gaddic. As I get older, my memory isn't all that it's cracked up to be and I have to use notes to remind me of things that I would have otherwise missed. Nemesis has a tendency of having flashbacks to some other periods of time to cover things that happened in between books.  

 

Nemesis dances back and forth between 'I must kill Tyrus' to 'I can't kill him, I still love him.' However, the ending really makes up for things that happen throughout the story. You can tell that Tyrus and Nemesis were made for each other even though Diabolics weren't supposed to be made to have feelings. Her love for Donia one again proves that she's not just something created in a lab without feelings. There’s a series of betrayals, of surprises and shocking revelations, and definite romance between Tyrus and Nemesis even after they realize they can't truly be together if what they originally intended for the Empire is going to happen. In case you weren’t aware, this series is based off I, Claudius, and the Roman Empire. Now you know!





Chapter 1 1
I HAD THE MOST FAMOUS face in the galaxy, but no one recognized me.

Today, there were eyes on me. I felt them.

My feet scuffed to a stop.

A split second later, another pair of footsteps halted.

I was being followed.

My steps resumed their smooth stride down the street. Interesting. It had been months since I’d faced a threat. In truth, I’d grown rather restless with boredom.

Misery was a constant of life on Devil’s Shade. In this most distant and hopeless of provinces, frustration boiled in every heart, leaked through every strident voice. Anger sought an outlet.

A lone young woman drew predators.

I could have avoided trouble, if I’d tried to blend in. I could have cut my long locks, worn large jackets, ducked my head… my size alone could have convinced hostile eyes that I was a decently muscled male. But something hard and vicious in me took pleasure in refusing to hide.

Instead I wore my long white-blond hair down. I’d made the color fashionable and saw it everywhere now, so why change it? When I walked down the street, I did not slouch. I made no effort whatsoever to avoid strangers’ attention. I met every stare with a stare.

They were just humans. Let them hide from me.

The only disguise that obscured me was the burn across the right side of my face. I had Neveni Sagnau to thank for that tiny scrap of anonymity. If I ever met her again, I meant to return the favor.

My steps slowed again so I could gauge how many pursued me. The subtle pause between the steps grinding to a halt…

Three.

Pity.

I’d been hoping for a challenge.

My mind rushed over the rules I’d laid out for myself: no attacking without provocation, and no chasing however much it entertained me. After all, it was never fair, and giving chase stoked a dark instinct in me, one I had resolved to battle.

I was a Diabolic engineered for murder, but I was not some crazed beast.

A rational being did not chase one who fled, nor could I assume anyone’s motives without evidence. Yet even as I reminded myself, I strained my ears for the shuffling of footsteps, and a pleasant excitement began to shiver through my limbs.

Stop. Do not indulge this, I told myself, and stopped walking.

It took several lingering, sloppy seconds for my pursuers to catch up to me.

The trio of shadowy men broke into jeering smiles as they fanned out around me. “You look lost,” called the largest of them.

I regarded them for a long moment.

My total lack of fear often frightened away those men who sniffed about for the vulnerable. Most heeded their instincts that something was “off” about me and escaped with their lives.

“Understand me,” I said quietly and clearly. “I don’t want to be followed. I am going to walk away and you will go in another direction. I will show no mercy on you otherwise.”

Then I turned my back to them. A dank alleyway presented itself, and I swerved into it. A dead end: perfect. I leaned against a wall to wait.

They followed.

“You looked better from behind,” called the scraggly-haired one, and the other two laughed. “What’s that on your face, a disease?”

I could have lied about my scars and said it was a disease. Skin-rot, maybe. It might have driven them away.

But I was not in the mood to be kind. I just waited.

“Answer me, you ugly bitch,” the man snarled. “I’m being nice to you.”

“Yeah, we’re real nice,” said the largest of them, elbowing the third, the quiet one hanging back. “Aren’t we?”

Uneasy laughter and a muttered, “Maybe we should go,” from the third.

“No, no, she’s got to tell us we’re nice,” said the scraggly one. “Actually, maybe thank us. Thank us for being nice to such an ugly bitch.”

The scraggly one crossed the distance to me and invaded my space, until I could smell his body odor, until I could see the pores on his nose, the missing teeth bared by his smile. He planted one palm on the wall next to my head, and then the other.

“Well? Gonna say anything now?” he said. “How about… now?”

Then he laid his hands on me.

I’d warned them.

I rammed an uppercut into his jaw, and his bones gave a satisfying crunch as his neck fractured, killing him instantly. Forward I shot, snagging the arms of both his companions before they could react, dragging them bodily closer to me.

“Who’s next?” I roared, my voice bestial.

Panic lit their faces. I crashed my head into the larger man’s face, then sank a roundhouse into the ribs of the other, hearing the splinter on impact.

The larger one had stumbled back from me, clutching his head, and now he stumbled over his dead friend. He gave a squawk of anger at the sight of him.… “Murph? Murph! She killed him! She…” His hand dove into his jacket and withdrew a blade that gleamed in the light.

It slashed at my face. Too easy. I caught his wrist. His eyes met mine, disbelief ablaze in his face as I slowly twisted his arm about to turn his blade back toward him. This man was so large, he’d likely never been overpowered in his life, and now he found himself at my mercy.

“Having second thoughts?” I whispered.

“You bitch—” he rasped, and sealed his fate.

Enough. I stopped holding back and stabbed the blade through his eye.

Then I turned on the third man, the most hesitant of the three, who was sprawled on the concrete of the alley.

“Well?” I spread my arms invitingly.

He gawked up at me, wild-eyed with terror, and he finally saw me.

My size. The white-blond of my hair. The dead men behind me, battered with my unnatural strength, murdered so easily with an unnatural skill…

“It’s you. It has to be you.” He said the words with a sort of wonder. He raised his shaking hand and gestured to something behind me.

I could guess what it was before I looked, but I did so anyway, just hoping he’d try to strike at my back and give me an excuse to kill him.

Sure enough, there was graffiti on the wall amid the indecipherable messages of the dispossessed, a single stark image of that cruel and lion-haired goddess, white fire seeming to scorch up around her hard, precise features fixed in promise of revenge.

Above and below her, that familiar phrase:

NEMESIS LIVES

The pathetic wretch was scurrying back, still on the ground, scooting like a crab across the alley.

“Don’t hurt me,” he said to me. “I didn’t want to do this. I swear to you, I didn’t. Please, Nemesis. Please.”

Yes. Now that he knew precisely what I was, he knew this was what he should have been doing from the start: begging me for his life. And I should not listen to him. He had seen me. He would give me away. He would endanger me.

I had promised no mercy.

He knew there was no escaping a Diabolic.

As I stalked after this weak, pitiful thing, a memory tickled at the back of my mind—another man, so many years ago, pleading with me to spare his life. I’d made one decision then as a young Diabolic desperate to escape a lifelong cage.

But I was not that frightened child now. I was not a trapped creature, at the mercy of others. There was no Matriarch here to make this decision in my stead, and I no longer believed there was a better, kinder life awaiting me if I but shed a few more drops of blood. No. All that lay down that path for me was more death, more ruin, more destruction.

His eyes were screwed shut, muscles braced, head bowed in surrender to fate.

“What is your name?” I said to him.

“Janus.”

“Janus what?”

“Janus Metz, Your Supremacy.”

My jaw clenched. Your Supremacy. I’d hoped never to hear that accursed honorific again. But since he’d used it, I seized his hair and tilted his face up to make him look at me. “You will not tell another soul you saw me.”

“No,” he said.

“Good, because I will remember your name, and if you are lying to me…” I ripped a handful of hair from his head, and held it up for him to see. “I have your scent, Janus Metz. Do you know Diabolics can track like bloodhounds?”

It was a lie. My sense of smell was as dull as a regular human’s. He couldn’t know that.

He nodded, wide-eyed. “I know I can’t run.”

“That’s very wise of you. You will take care of these bodies for me.”

“Of course!”

“And you will never do anything like this again: no victimizing people on the street.”

“I didn’t want to—”

“You were weak. You gave in to them. Never do that again. I will find out if you do.”

I would not find out, but I let him think so. He looked upon me with a strange, slack-jawed expression. “You truly are what they say you are,” he whispered. “You seek justice.” His eyes were actually shimmering with tears. “I will prove myself. I will deserve your mercy!”

I sighed and knocked him back to the ground with my heel, then stepped past him. But something made me turn back.

He was still sprawled on the ground. But over his head, on the rude brick, a pair of painted eyes glared into mine, their look accusatory.

I glared back. Nemesis the icon, the galaxy’s own hero—a legend who did not and never had truly existed.

The Excess had believed me dead. Not at my husband’s hands, but supposedly at the hands of the Partisans years before, during their attack on the Tigris.… It had been my attack, but blame was laid to them, for all the truths of the Empire were cloaked in lies. Apparently, the Nemesis slain in full view of the galaxy in the ball dome was a Partisan imposter.

Yes, I’d been dead as far as everyone knew, and in retrospect, I’d been better off for it. I could have lived a life of obscurity, forgotten, a short-lived and tragic memory.

Instead I’d set out to show myself alive by assassinating Tyrus—and then I’d truly ruined everything.




Monday, October 30, 2017

Monday #Review - The Empress by S.J. Kincaid #YA #Science Fiction

Series: The Diabolic # 2
Format: Hardcover, 384 pages
Release Date: October 31, 2017
Publisher: Simon & Schuster Books for Young Readers
Source: Edelweiss
Genre: Young Adult \ Action & Adventure

It’s a new day in the Empire. Tyrus has ascended to the throne with Nemesis by his side and now they can find a new way forward—one where they don’t have to hide or scheme or kill. One where creatures like Nemesis will be given worth and recognition, where science and information can be shared with everyone and not just the elite.
But having power isn’t the same thing as keeping it, and change isn’t always welcome. The ruling class, the Grandiloquy, has held control over planets and systems for centuries—and they are plotting to stop this teenage Emperor and Nemesis, who is considered nothing more than a creature and certainly not worthy of being Empress.
Nemesis will protect Tyrus at any cost. He is the love of her life, and they are partners in this new beginning. But she cannot protect him by being the killing machine she once was. She will have to prove the humanity that she’s found inside herself to the whole Empire—or she and Tyrus may lose more than just the throne. But if proving her humanity means that she and Tyrus must do inhuman things, is the fight worth the cost of winning it?



The Empress, by author S.J. Kincaid, is the second installment in The Diabolic trilogy. In the first book in the series, the author introduced us to Nemesis Impyrean, a genetically engineered Diabolic who was bodyguard to Sidonia Impyrean, the daughter of an important political figure in the Empire. Knowing that Sidonia was most likely going to be killed, Nemesis traveled with her to protect her. She eventually met & connected with 19-year old Tyrus von Domitrian who has since risen to become Emperor. 

As their plan of marrying moves forward, Nemesis is set to become the first genetically engineered person to rise to the position of Empress. Unfortunately for Nemesis, a great may of the Gradiloquy, as well as the Helionics, hate her with a passion. Their attempts at keeping her from becoming the Empress has led to assassination attempts, and a treacherous Senator named Pasus who will do anything to put a boot to the neck of not only Tyrus, but Nemesis as well. Tyrus has his own issues as well. He is no longer the crazy person people have watched for years. He is now in the seat of the most important person in the galaxy. 

Tyrus must bring the various factions together so that he can keep his people safe from outside forces. One of the curious trips in this book was Tyrus and Nemesis' trip a galaxy known as Transaturnine where a Sacred City exists. It is home to the Interdict, leader of the Vicars who have the power that Tyrus needs to make his scepter work. Tyrus not only wants the Interdict's blessing for his rise to being Emperor, but he also wants the Interdict to impart human-hood on Nemesis so tat they can marry with his blessing. It is during this trip, that a bit of history of the human race is revealed.  

Nemesis only true ally might end up being Neveni, but will revenge against the Empire be too much to keep their friendship on even keel? Nemesis, as a character, really goes through the garbage disposal before being spit out to leave her bloodied and having to refocus her own path to happiness. She really can't rely on anyone else. I dare say that this book takes a whole lot of twists, and shocking turns of events. I'm still hyperventilating at the last 3 chapters of this book, and how Kincaid ends the story.

This is a story that was supposed to be happy time for the apparent happy couple, only to turn into hell on earth for both of them, which makes you curious what will happen in the third installment. I offer up that I, like many others, would have been happy had the first installment been a standalone. Now, with all that has happened, and all that is to come, one can't ignore the itch to discover what happens next to Nemesis and Tyrus. 



1

SOMEONE had poisoned me. I knew it with a single sip.

That someone was about to die.

I glanced around the crowded presence chamber, hoping to spot the doomed idiot who thought to poison a Diabolic. This was hardly the first attempt on my life in the harried days since Tyrus’s coronation. There’d been the young Grande Austerlitz, who tried to stab me in a surprise attack. I’d been bemused enough to tolerate his clumsy slashes for a few moments.

It seemed wise to be diplomatic, so I gave him a chance. “Stop this at once,” I told him, dodging his next slash, his next.

He just bared his teeth and dove at me. I sidestepped him and hooked his ankle in mine to flip his legs out from under him. He screamed out as he tried to launch himself back to his feet—so I delivered a kick to his head that broke his skull open.

Days passed before the next attempt. This one had been a fanatical junior vicar. She gave away her intentions with the shout of, “Abomination!” just before she tried to pull me into the air lock with her.

I tore from her grip and batted her away, knocking her into the air-lock shaft. The blast doors sealed closed behind her—clearly some automated timer she’d set up in advance—and I met her eyes in the split second before the door to space popped open behind her and vented her into the darkness.

When criminals were vented to space for execution, the onlookers were supposed to turn their backs and look away. It was a gesture of deliberate disrespect. The condemned were so unworthy, even their deaths wouldn’t be watched.

For this bold woman who’d attacked me, I felt a strange desire to watch her float away. She’d seen the fate of Austerlitz and still mounted a direct attack. This was the least I could do for one of such daring. There were a great many Grandiloquy who loathed me, a great many Helionics who scorned me with every righteous fiber of their being, but few were bold enough to act upon their malice.

Helionics viewed creatures like me as subhumans. The “dan” in our names meant we were beneath them in status, yet now their new Emperor meant to wed me. They would have to kneel to a creature. A Diabolic.

The assassination attempts weren’t a surprise to me; the infrequency of the attempts was. A mere three attempts on my life in ten days? It was actually somewhat disappointing.

I welcomed the familiarity of feeling in danger. It tightened my focus, made my heart pick up a beat. My gaze swept the crowd as I drew the goblet to my lips, because surely my would-be assassin was fool enough to watch me drink this poison.

Yet I realized in moments that too many eyes were fixed on me to guess which pair might belong to my poisoner. I should have realized it at once. After all, everywhere I went now, I was watched, I was scrutinized, I invited discussion and opinion.

“Do they ever tire of staring?” I’d wondered the first night after the coronation, when I’d noticed the unnatural degree of scrutiny.

“This is just life as a Domitrian,” Tyrus told me.

So my assassin . . . There were too many candidates. The crowd for the Day of Pardon was simply too thick, and there was no guessing who’d meant to end my life. Too many of these people watching me probably wished to do it.

Then a familiar pair of pale eyes met mine, and Tyrus inclined his head toward the exit, telling me silently that we needed to part ways with this company of Grandiloquy. It was time for the ceremony, which we would spend with the Excess.

I dipped my head in acknowledgment. The Day of Pardon would be held in the Great Heliosphere. It was an important imperial holiday, one of the few aimed at pleasing the Excess, who lived on planets, rather than the ruling Grandiloquy space dwellers.

On this day, Tyrus would enjoy the Emperor’s privilege of commuting the prison sentences of several Excess who’d converted to the Helionic faith. I aimed for the exit, knowing Tyrus would meet me there. Then my steps stilled as I passed a cluster of revelers gathered before Tyrus’s cousin and her husband.

I always took note of those who flocked to the Successor Primus, Devineé. She was Tyrus’s last immediate relative and consequently heir to his throne. In my eyes, she was the greatest threat he faced. I’d damaged her mind beyond healing, so she couldn’t plot on her own behalf, but others could use her as a puppet. Had it been up to me, she’d be dead already. It was Tyrus’s decision, though. She was the last of his family, and I’d disabled her. He’d view her murder as monstrous.

And then . . .

Then the realization crawled into my mind: there was a weapon of murder in my hand that could not be blamed on me or traced back to me.

I made up my mind. I walked over to my intended’s sole living relative. As my shadow slid over her, her foggy gaze rose to mine.

“Hello, Your Eminence. Are you enjoying the festivities?” I said pleasantly, looming above her.

Devineé blinked up at me dully, unable to comprehend me. I set down my goblet seemingly offhandedly, just beside hers. I made a show of unwinding my elaborate twist of currently chestnut brown hair, then arranging it anew (unnecessary with the hair stilts that arranged my locks in any style, but many women fussed over hair anyway).

“Fine conversation,” I said to Devineé. “We must speak again.”

Then I plucked up her goblet, leaving mine behind. And so quickly, so easily, it was done. I headed out to meet Tyrus for the ceremony, hoping that by the time it concluded, we’d hear news of it: confirmation of the death of his deadliest foe.

• • •

“You look beautiful,” Tyrus murmured to me as we neared the heliosphere.

“I know,” I said.

We were both wearing reflective garments of silver, interwoven with veins of liquid crystal. Though I’d gone with auburn hair and a darker skin tone, Tyrus looked the same as always, pale and lightly freckled, with clever pale eyes and light, sharply angled eyebrows crowned with tousled red hair.

Just outside the Great Heliosphere, I hesitated. It wasn’t like me to be nervous, and I wasn’t, per se. . . . But I just knew I was about to commit an obscenity, marching into the Great Heliosphere and taking an honored place during the ceremony.

Tyrus guessed the turn of my thoughts. He leaned in closer to me, dropping his voice. “There will be no issue with zealots today. We’re not broadcasting this live, so we can edit any incidents out of the transmission. We’ve also borrowed a vicar. This is a holiday for the Excess, so they comprise the audience. They will be more favorably disposed toward us.”

He meant toward me.

Of course he did. Tyrus had been careful with every move of his reign so far, since he was the sort to think ten steps ahead before making a single one. I’d been eased slowly into public life over the last weeks.

First the galaxy was transmitted glimpses of me from the dramatic scene at the coronation, when Tyrus declared his love for me and embraced me before all, consigning his grandmother to death in my place. My prisoner’s garb had been modified in the transmission to a lovely, tasteful set of rags, and my unpigmented hair to a mane of effervescent gold. I looked a lost princess from a tale, not a Diabolic.

The transmission was effective in one respect: Cygna had received all the blame—rightfully—for the late Emperor Randevald’s death.

The galaxy received just that glimpse of me, enough to set the Excess on their planets across the empire wondering who I could be, wondering what story lay behind my appearance in public life. Tyrus believed the best way to strip a secret of its power was to glare a shining light on it from the angle of choice, to exhibit it fearlessly rather than seek to hide it. He followed up on that first glimpse by introducing me as his future Empress—and a Diabolic—at his first Convocation.

Thousands gathered in person on the Valor Novus, the central starship of the Chrysanthemum, and avatars from light-years away appeared to fill the rest of the seats in the Grand Sanctum. It was the greatest chamber on the vessel and only used on such occasions as the first time a new Emperor addressed the powerful of his realm.

Tyrus planted the question about me with one of his allies, and then gave his prepared answer: “My fiancée will be a symbol of the new era we begin here today. Her name is Nemesis dan Impyrean. Some will be scandalized that I have no intention of wedding a member of this Empire’s elite. I say, let them be scandalized, for I love Nemesis above any other. She is the most honest, courageous, and worthy candidate I can imagine as the Empress of this galaxy, and I know you will come to admire her as I have.”

He’d had the sound dampened in certain parts of the chamber in advance, anticipating the stir of voices. Many of the traditional objectors, though, dared do nothing but cheer. Tyrus had taken Helionic prisoners at his coronation. He intended to release them now that the danger of his grandmother was past—provided their relatives in the Senate showed themselves cooperative in this transmission. Thus, those few objections were squelched, whereas sound was amplified from those allies Tyrus could count on to cheer and applaud.

Every major figure in the galactic media of Eurydice received a personal message from Tyrus. He’d greeted each of them, and his words included the “coded language” indicating they were to support me cheerfully in public.

Before more questions could be asked, he forged onward to his lofty hopes about restoring the sciences to tackle the menace of malignant space. This time he selectively muted the Grandiloquy so the cheering of the Excess could be heard. Airing both of his most scandalous intentions at once divided the outrage, as he’d hoped.

Then, on a final note, when cheering swelled at the conclusion of his first Convocation speech, Tyrus reached out, took me by the hand, and drew me to his side to exhibit me at the very finest. Far from my natural, colorless albinism, I appeared hued with brilliant black hair and bronzed skin, stenciled with effervescent glow over the cheekbones, in a gleaming dress of cascading gold sheets.

A beautiful woman, not a Diabolic. That’s how I appeared.

Yet illusion could only get us so far. I knew that in my heart.

Now, here we were at this first real test of whether my public image was being received as Tyrus hoped. With Excess in the audience, they’d hopefully be too amazed to find themselves at this great event to bother dwelling on who—or rather, what—I was.

Tyrus and I stepped into the Great Heliosphere. I was painfully conscious of every single flicker of my lashes, every twitch of my muscles. Now that everyone knew how human I was not, it had become more essential to seem human than ever before.

The crowd within the Great Heliosphere lapsed into silence as we drew into the sacred chamber of diamond and crystal, and then they were dropping to their knees, hands to their hearts in salute to the Emperor.

“Rise,” Tyrus said. He never kept them lingering on their knees as Randevald had been wont to do.

We moved through the parted sea of bodies, and Tyrus glimpsed Astra nu Amador, a nervous young vicar who worked for Senator von Amador.

Tyrus inclined his head in silent thanks to Astra. She returned it with a smile. She was ambitious enough to see that she might become Vicar Primus if she impressed us, replacing Fustian nan Domitrian. Tyrus and Fustian had been at odds since the coronation, when Fustian refused to bless me. Fustian would not have performed this ceremony with me present.

Now, as I raised my eyes to take in our surroundings, the sheer force of the light blasting in through the windows truly registered, though it cast only a faint warmth over my skin. The heliosphere was designed to refract starlight in myriad ways for services. No mirrors were needed to amplify the starlight this close to the red hypergiant star, Hephaestus, for the Ritual of Pardon.

So large, so bright was Hephaestus that the distant, smaller stars of the Cosmos were drowned out against the black. The crowd would have appeared but silhouettes against the great blaze of its light, but for the glowing pigment under their skin that set their features in stark relief. I didn’t recognize any of the faces.

We stood alone in the innermost circle as the Vicar Astra set about placing sacred chalices throughout the chamber.

The Excess prisoners shuffled inside in a silent line. They’d all converted to the Helionic faith in prison, and they were the fortunate dozen due to be pardoned this year as reward for their penitence.

Tyrus’s role in this ceremony was brief. He stepped forward, and the men and women knelt before him, displaying their pitifully bared heads, where they’d shaved away their hair to exhibit their faith. He spoke the short litany of pardon, and then the vicar took it from there.

Astra moved between the converts to aid them in shedding their clothing. Then she led each of the converts by the hands to the window to position them in the glare of the sacred hypergiant. The naked men and women pressed up against the window, spreading their arms, their fingers, soaking light into every square centimeter of their skin.

Tyrus took my arm, nudged me gently, and we stepped back, and back, as the vicar slowly adjusted the optics so more light from the hypergiant could seep into the chamber.

Then the hypergiant’s light grew so bright, it seemed to lance into my pupils. The white skein of starlight scorched my eyes, and my hand flew up instinctively to protect my face. Through the veil over my vision, I heard the rustle of other people raising their hands to do the same. Then heat followed, a great, terrible wave of it that pummeled the air about us, stinging my skin, and I knew it was too much heat.

Something was wrong.


The pardoned men and women scrambled back from the windows, dark silhouettes contorting as their terrible screams knifed the air. The vicar’s garb flared ablaze and the oil chalices spouted columns of heat.

I comprehended several things all at once: flames, hundreds of bodies all about me, and one exit.

This was a death trap.




Wednesday, November 2, 2016

#Wednesday Review - The Diabolic by S.J. Kincaid #YALit, Science Fiction @SJKincaidBooks @SimonKIDS

Series: Standalone
Format: Hardcover, 416 pages
Release Date: November 1, 2016
Publisher: Simon & Schuster BYR
Source: Publisher via Edelweiss
Genre: YA, Science Fiction


Red Queen meets The Hunger Games in this epic novel about what happens when the galaxy’s most deadly weapon masquerades as a senator’s daughter and a hostage of the galactic court.

A Diabolic is ruthless. A Diabolic is powerful. A Diabolic has a single task: Kill in order to protect the person you’ve been created for. 

Nemesis is a Diabolic, a humanoid teenager created to protect a galactic senator’s daughter, Sidonia. The two have grown up side by side, but are in no way sisters. Nemesis is expected to give her life for Sidonia, and she would do so gladly. She would also take as many lives as necessary to keep Sidonia safe.

When the power-mad Emperor learns Sidonia’s father is participating in a rebellion, he summons Sidonia to the Galactic court. She is to serve as a hostage. Now, there is only one way for Nemesis to protect Sidonia. She must become her. Nemesis travels to the court disguised as Sidonia—a killing machine masquerading in a world of corrupt politicians and two-faced senators’ children. It’s a nest of vipers with threats on every side, but Nemesis must keep her true abilities a secret or risk everything.

As the Empire begins to fracture and rebellion looms closer, Nemesis learns there is something more to her than just deadly force. She finds a humanity truer than what she encounters from most humans. Amidst all the danger, action, and intrigue, her humanity just might be the thing that saves her life—and the empire.





Author S.J. Kincaid's The Diabolic is a young adult, science fiction, standalone novel that mixes a bit of religion and science together to make one helluva a story that will not only entertain you, but boggle your mind as well. I dare say that the synopsis does a good job of telling you what the book is all about. So, let me summarize without spoilers. The protagonist of the story is called Nemesis. She is an genetically engineered killing machine and protector.

She was raised in captivity, and had to do things that will probably make your skin break out in goose bumps. At an early age, Nemesis was bought by the Von Impyrean family to protect their only daughter Sidonia. Probably a good idea when Senator Von Impyrean has made more than a few enemies, including the Emperor. Nemesis and Sidonia were chemically bonded so that there is firm connection. One could say that Nemesis was created to have no emotions, or human feelings. Nemesis would give up her life for Sidonia. 

The story really kicks into gear when the Emperor summons Sidonia to Chrysanthemum (Galactic Court). In a bold move, the Matriarch of the family chooses to send her viper into harms way, rather than her own flesh and blood. This means making major alterations to Nemesis so she can pass as Sidonia. The Emperor knows that certain families have been moving against him, and thus using their sons and daughters as hostages to keep them in line, is a brilliant move. 

What's really interesting is that Diabolic's were officially banned by the Emperor, so, Nemesis being there posing as Sidonia, is a real feat of ingenuity. But, the Emperor has managed to be above the fray by keeping three of his own. Nemesis finds that she is actually feeling things that she was aware she could do. In the beginning, Nemesis is a cold, uncaring humanoid. By the time the story is over, Nemesis learns the ins and outs of human emotions, and even falls in love with one of the most twisted characters in the entire book; Tyrus Domitran.

There are a variety of secondary characters that need your attention. From Sidonia, who shocked me with her feelings for Nemesis. To Neveni Sagnau who befriends and allies herself with Nemesis against the Emperor and his staunchest allies like Elantra Pasus who I love to call the men girl of the story. Tyrus, though, is the one you really need to pay attention to. To being a madman. To becoming an ally of Sidonia. To being involved in a massive twisted scheme that will change the course of the Empire.

This book has everything. Rebels who want to go back to the way things were before the Emperor put a stop to schooling, research, and technology. To Senators who are lined up on both sides of the issue. To an Emperor who claims that he, not GOD, is the voice of the Empire, and what he says is law not to be trifled with. I liked that we didn't say just in one place. I liked watching as Nemesis got her first look at planetary life. I dare say that I liked Nemesis and Sidonia's relationship. It very much surprised me how much Sidonia thought she had to be the one to protect Nemesis and was brave right to the end.